Happy Tomorrow Comments

this was short and sweet and pretty.

Beutiful work Very delicate. =]

wonderful dedication to a very special friend.....i love the way you put the words together

it's so cute how you put your unique unparalleled thoughts into little words that portrays a bigger picture

lovely- so serene, wise and true.

Lovely! Dorothy

You beautiful my dear!

No words to say No words to hear You know better than me What do I want to say I know better than you What do you want to say

Awwwww that was beautiful! ! ! ! You are very sweet! ! ! ! ! !

excellent...to have found so much joy and in such an effective way in a dew dropp so tiny is worth applause! 10!

Gentle and sensitive dedication... Your optimism sparkles... And yours 'tomorrow' also. 10... Tsira

cool poem i love it keep goin

very well, why we need happy tommorow and always on happy endings?

superb...simple..sweet

Pass The days of sorrow Shiny, tiny glass Shows Happy tomorrow --- You have explicitely penned out a great piece of hope...i love your lines. a 10.

Ah those pearls of dew upon the grass, a sign that days of sorrow - soon will pass! A pleasure to read Shiraz! *10 *! ! Friend Thad

Why does one become a lyric poet? At the moment we can enjoy a poem like this. This style dèbuts in Greece, pass through Rome, China, maybe India, gets to the Italian Twentieth century...it passed through and got to Iran, too, only that I didn't know it.

Your future is crystal clear, I love these pearls of wisdom that you write, well done, 10 Lynda xx

A very tender poem which delivers a wise message.10!