Monday, August 12, 2013

Happy Times Comments

Rating: 5.0

You have got my face
Got my nose got my body, curves
And curls
And still you adored for the cuter one
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Chinedu Dike 29 February 2020

A beautiful depiction of happy times shared with a twin sister. A very compassionate work of art. Thanks for sharing, Jemima.

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Susan Lacovara 26 February 2014

This took me back to my schoolgirl days, quite long gone now....but I easily related to your poem. Well done...keep writing with your own personal flair...it helps to paint the vivid picture of you! PEACE

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George Price 16 August 2013

Good rhyming scheme, very interesting personal feel. Great poem, keep it up.

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