You have got my face
Got my nose got my body, curves
And curls
And still you adored for the cuter one
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This took me back to my schoolgirl days, quite long gone now....but I easily related to your poem. Well done...keep writing with your own personal flair...it helps to paint the vivid picture of you! PEACE
Good rhyming scheme, very interesting personal feel. Great poem, keep it up.
A beautiful depiction of happy times shared with a twin sister. A very compassionate work of art. Thanks for sharing, Jemima.