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Left the sky canvas
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Glory of our nice tradition is beautifully captured in rhythm. Good work.
The beauty of past values cannot be overestimated. Always a pleasure to read you. Kind wishes. Sandra
With flower and songs Happy ONAM again.. Rachel Ann Butler
indeed it was an ultimate dream rule the like of which perhaps remain a dream.excellent write. voted10 suryua
Happy Onam to you Vinod.Its a nice celebration poem.
well expresed poem, thank you for sharing..................10+++
Happy Onam, a day of celebration, a day of beauty, flowers and songs. Well versed....
Please write bigger poems! !