Wednesday, January 2, 2013

Happy New Year Comments

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Oh my dear! Oh my dear!
Bidding adieu I'm going to rear
May you all have great time ahead?
Wishing you all A Happy New Year
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Kishor Pathak
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Shahzia Batool 27 January 2013

A poem...full of energy & positivity... the last two stanzas have all the life within! ! ! good job! ! !

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Kishor Pathak 04 January 2013

My cordial thanks to next two angels in here...I have read your poems and you people are simply stupendous...Will give my comments all at a time with few suggestions too

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Jaya Mishra 04 January 2013

What a flow... Reading you describing those cheerfull times.... I could feel myself standing there and enjoying those times to. Philosophies n fun n message...all wrapped up sooo well. A brillant write. Worth reading this one....! ! !

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Payal Parande 04 January 2013

the flow the poem is absolutely phenomenal the words are pinned beautiful and the meaning is beyond explanation...bravo sir

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Kishor Pathak 03 January 2013

Thnks to both of you angels. I'm gald after having comments from two best writers in here. My new Year kicked off so well.

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Hazel Durham 02 January 2013

What an original idea a poem about the passing year as if it's a person watching over us, amazing imagery so colourful and bright! With such a wonderful message to us all, thanks for sharing!

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Kishor Pathak

Kishor Pathak

Nagpur, Maharashtra, India
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