Oh my dear! Oh my dear!
Bidding adieu I'm going to rear
May you all have great time ahead?
Wishing you all A Happy New Year
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My cordial thanks to next two angels in here...I have read your poems and you people are simply stupendous...Will give my comments all at a time with few suggestions too
What a flow... Reading you describing those cheerfull times.... I could feel myself standing there and enjoying those times to. Philosophies n fun n message...all wrapped up sooo well. A brillant write. Worth reading this one....! ! !
the flow the poem is absolutely phenomenal the words are pinned beautiful and the meaning is beyond explanation...bravo sir
Thnks to both of you angels. I'm gald after having comments from two best writers in here. My new Year kicked off so well.
What an original idea a poem about the passing year as if it's a person watching over us, amazing imagery so colourful and bright! With such a wonderful message to us all, thanks for sharing!
A poem...full of energy & positivity... the last two stanzas have all the life within! ! ! good job! ! !