Happy New Year Comments

Timely poem

Superb Sai. Yes every end has a new beginning.congrats

Beautifully written..... I enjoyed reading it.

It reads like a concrete poem It is brilliant.. It is cool. But it charges the reader with an optimistic view of life. Happy New Year Dear Poet

I love it! That was great!

It was like you had made the geography of time into a matryoshka doll, with every moment becoming a precedents for the next, showing that infinity can be stretched to a simple moment and fabricated as a false perception of our existence. Time is Now and only Now all other points are ephemeral. A fascinating read with a deep philosophical undercurrent. Could cause a head ache but definitly worth it

good one...it was a sensible poem.

fantastic poem on new year.. I really enjoyed readng it.: -)

simple but effective with a great message!

An enjoyable and revealing poem

Hi Vijay, you requested me to comment on your poem, so I'll give you my genuine feeling about it. It has a powerful message behind it, however, I found that it was a bit too repetitious. Perhaps breaking it up with different words would make it more riveting. Best wishes and Happy New Year! :) Joses

Nice wordings. Top notch Spiritual Leaders say Time is illusion. All that is is this moment only, which is eternal. Try catching the space between thoughts, a thoughtless state and stay there. If you could capture that moment you have achieved everything, Eternal Happiness.

you know the art of presenting complex realities in simple manner 10/10

very nice poem i like it 10 on 10

a good thouhjt in good way is put.10 marks

a cute poem... keep it up.................... rgrds sree

you have drawn the circle very well...happy new year

thoughtful piece, thanks for sharing 10

A nice write..Happy new Year, too

I like how you showed the concept of the begginging in every end. I think it goes deeper than most people think.