Thursday, December 31, 2009

Happy New Year Comments

Rating: 3.5

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Vijay Sai R
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Kishor 02 January 2019

Timely poem

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S Karuppaiah. Kcas 01 January 2019

Superb Sai. Yes every end has a new beginning.congrats

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Jeanette Telusma 03 January 2018

Beautifully written..... I enjoyed reading it.

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Dr. Ramesh Mukhopadhyaya 04 January 2013

It reads like a concrete poem It is brilliant.. It is cool. But it charges the reader with an optimistic view of life. Happy New Year Dear Poet

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Drew Williams 01 January 2013

I love it! That was great!

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Kevin Patrick 31 December 2012

It was like you had made the geography of time into a matryoshka doll, with every moment becoming a precedents for the next, showing that infinity can be stretched to a simple moment and fabricated as a false perception of our existence. Time is Now and only Now all other points are ephemeral. A fascinating read with a deep philosophical undercurrent. Could cause a head ache but definitly worth it

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Yogini Dawar 29 December 2012

good one...it was a sensible poem.

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Zeenat Fatima 29 December 2012

fantastic poem on new year.. I really enjoyed readng it.: -)

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Emily Stroud 26 December 2012

simple but effective with a great message!

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Meera Panigrahi 11 December 2012

An enjoyable and revealing poem

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Joses Tirtabudi 31 December 2011

Hi Vijay, you requested me to comment on your poem, so I'll give you my genuine feeling about it. It has a powerful message behind it, however, I found that it was a bit too repetitious. Perhaps breaking it up with different words would make it more riveting. Best wishes and Happy New Year! :) Joses

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Gan Chennai 24 May 2010

Nice wordings. Top notch Spiritual Leaders say Time is illusion. All that is is this moment only, which is eternal. Try catching the space between thoughts, a thoughtless state and stay there. If you could capture that moment you have achieved everything, Eternal Happiness.

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Gul naz 18 January 2010

you know the art of presenting complex realities in simple manner 10/10

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Aprajita Rana 05 January 2010

very nice poem i like it 10 on 10

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 02 January 2010

a good thouhjt in good way is put.10 marks

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Sreejith Kulaparambil 02 January 2010

a cute poem... keep it up.................... rgrds sree

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Samanyan Lakshminarayanan 01 January 2010

you have drawn the circle very well...happy new year

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PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE 01 January 2010

thoughtful piece, thanks for sharing 10

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Meggie Gultiano 31 December 2009

A nice write..Happy new Year, too

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I like how you showed the concept of the begginging in every end. I think it goes deeper than most people think.

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Vijay Sai R

Vijay Sai R

Trichy, South India
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