Second by second minute ends
Minute by minute hour ends
Hour by hour day ends
Day by day week ends
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It reads like a concrete poem It is brilliant.. It is cool. But it charges the reader with an optimistic view of life. Happy New Year Dear Poet
It was like you had made the geography of time into a matryoshka doll, with every moment becoming a precedents for the next, showing that infinity can be stretched to a simple moment and fabricated as a false perception of our existence. Time is Now and only Now all other points are ephemeral. A fascinating read with a deep philosophical undercurrent. Could cause a head ache but definitly worth it
fantastic poem on new year.. I really enjoyed readng it.: -)
Hi Vijay, you requested me to comment on your poem, so I'll give you my genuine feeling about it. It has a powerful message behind it, however, I found that it was a bit too repetitious. Perhaps breaking it up with different words would make it more riveting. Best wishes and Happy New Year! :) Joses
Nice wordings. Top notch Spiritual Leaders say Time is illusion. All that is is this moment only, which is eternal. Try catching the space between thoughts, a thoughtless state and stay there. If you could capture that moment you have achieved everything, Eternal Happiness.
you know the art of presenting complex realities in simple manner 10/10
a cute poem... keep it up.................... rgrds sree
you have drawn the circle very well...happy new year
I like how you showed the concept of the begginging in every end. I think it goes deeper than most people think.
Timely poem