HAPPY NEW YEAR 2022
Without knocking on the door
You come stealthily at the night
When the sky is filled with stars
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'prosperous'? I don't recall having a 'particularly pecuniary prosperousness' in 2022. Rats! ! : ) bri 'pecuniary': 'of or relating to money'
Your 'clouds drop innocence' phrase stumps me aka I don't know what if means. The rest of stanza 5 I liked a lot, but though not needed, I 'miss' seeing punctuation marks.
'Face as it is drift away slowly' I would use 'as it drifts'. I especially enjoyed stanza 3. ;)
A wonderful poem of welcome of New Year 2022.Wish you a Very Happy New Year.
A true picture of the arrival of new year
I give 4 stars. Call me extravagent! ! ! bri ;)