Friday, December 31, 2021

Happy New Year 2022 Comments

Rating: 4.8

HAPPY NEW YEAR 2022
Without knocking on the door
You come stealthily at the night
When the sky is filled with stars
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Bri Edwards 16 October 2023

I give 4 stars. Call me extravagent! ! ! bri ;)

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Bri Edwards 16 October 2023

'prosperous'? I don't recall having a 'particularly pecuniary prosperousness' in 2022. Rats! ! : ) bri 'pecuniary': 'of or relating to money'

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Bri Edwards 16 October 2023

Your 'clouds drop innocence' phrase stumps me aka I don't know what if means. The rest of stanza 5 I liked a lot, but though not needed, I 'miss' seeing punctuation marks.

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Bri Edwards 16 October 2023

'Face as it is drift away slowly' I would use 'as it drifts'. I especially enjoyed stanza 3. ;)

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Bharati Nayak 06 January 2022

A wonderful poem of welcome of New Year 2022.Wish you a Very Happy New Year.

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A true picture of the arrival of new year

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Nabakishore Dash 01 January 2022

Genuine welcome 2022written nicely. Enjoyed the poem.

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