Wednesday, December 30, 2015

Happy New Year! Comments

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Seeing as this present year, serves its term,
The season's showing that it's leaving town
Nothing left for it to mow down or to crown
It's saying goodbye, its going back home
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Clarence Prince
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Bri Edwards 23 April 2017

Wisely, it knows how long it has to stay Making space, it's getting out of the way Knowing that the New Year is coming soon For many, it's leaving much gloom and doom ..........I like these 4 lines especially! How about looking to the north, sir Clarence? ! Happy New Year! Bri :) i'll put this into May showcase now.

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Gladys Brown Prince 07 January 2016

For many, it's leaving much gloom and doom And plenty of works for the New Year to do. It's the truth.

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Mj Lemon 02 January 2016

Wonderful sentiments for this time of year. Year combine just the right note of melancholy with great optimism. Well done.

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Muhammad Imtiyaz 31 December 2015

very beautiful sir....happy new year....

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Kumarmani Mahakul 30 December 2015

Makes the cooing bird finds a reason to coo Much work it has left the coming year to do./ Very fantastic lines in this poem conveys the eagerness of the coming new year. Wishing you too very happy new year. Interesting and amazing poem shared really.10

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