My life, like a sandbar,
has been taken over by a monster of a man
who wants my body under his control
so that, if he wishes,
...
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A Poem full of brilliance, this is a very honest poem about marriage SANS love, based upon religion only where the man is the ruler.5 Stars Full Score, dear honest poetess.
A great poem with an outcry about brutality against woman in the men dominated society. Well deserved poem of the day.
A sad song of sorrow that tells the story of marital madness yet pregnant with a pain that needs to be heard for all the women that suffer silently in their marriages...
Thank you Taslima. This is heart wrenching. Not a man, but a monster.
This poem is massively awesome. The employed irony is enough message to ladies to look before leap and fall in wrong hands. Thanks for sharing
Dribbling pain wail The tale so grail In the dark night As it's bound to rent. Words go less The scenic voice is enough The turmoil the soul undergo Everyday in those chains. Yes some people are like this. And they really ruin lives. A painful reflection.
Congratulation on POTD Taslima, It is a horrifying read. Unfortunately it is a mans world still and a horrible one at that. Keep well and safe. James.
Wow! To me its a huge merciless charge on wicked manhood by a subject innocent womanhood. Writer sees the nakedness of all the elements that weaved cruelty by A MAN to A WOMAN. Her crafty skill chills the conscience of every reasonable and fair-minded being. Congrats on your placement at the zenith on a judgement scale.X
So that, loving him, on some moonlit night I would commit suicide in a fit of ecstasy. - Terrific lines that come straight from the heart. Congrats on being the POD.
The brutal truth...domestic abuse is a real monster. A beautiful poem, well written. Thank you.
So that, loving him, on some moonlit night I would commit suicide in a fit of ecstasy. your sad experiences. tony
Happy Marriage, ironically presented, but this is the real situation in real women's life in the place where Dr. Taslima Nasrin, a true fighter for women's rights. CONGRATULATIONS Dr. Taslima wherever you are residing now, for this most deserving Member Poem Of The Day. IF circumstances allows, come to my country. My dear and beloved spouse is also a doctor, an urologist and my youngest son a aneasthesiologist. God Bless!
And again the same poem as the member POD after twelve days of modern poem....congrats to the brave heart womanhood writer of Bangladesh....
congratulation to you that you are poetess of the day, best emotional poem
VERY SAD HAPPENING DEAR.. I AM MOVED.. SO EFFECTIVE...10
The notion of happy marriage torn apart. A great poem throwing light on masculine brutality against woman to show that she is owned by him/husband. Congrats on modern poem of the day.
Wow! So powerful poem, indeed. Congrats, Taslima.