Happy Independence Day 2013 Comments

Hello, Dear Dinesh Nair, I am sorry, no one has reviewed your independence day versification after my regards to you. Please check why. great regards and love taj shah

Ah, Dear DineshJi, Wish you and Salute you. I wonder, rather excited to see your reflections. You have left nothing unnoticed, instead gathered all those past and present hard facts of a DREAM-NATION, its souls, their thought waves, laments, misgivings, hopes and earnest desires to be ONE to enjoy the nature-destined equality and securities; an absolute Oneness that might carry the whole humanity into heavenly heights on chariots of fraternity and Fakhr. (Pride) A wonderful verse that comprises, rather proclaims the soul-vibes of millions of Indians and Pakistanis. An elite dissection over the lands and minds. Wish you remain bathed in the glory of the most enduring literary nimbus for ever more. Cheers. Independence would become a reality with souls like these.

Marching my words in a straight line to give an honor, Happy Independence day India_Soul

Aswath, I am just greeting and shari ng a few concerns.There is no happiness over any aspect and let us bury our heads in the sand for a show.

A series of thoughts cast before us on the eve of Independence day...! ! ! .And what if a smile is planted on the face of each Malala Whom we see here and there amidst the throngs? What if we stand together and laugh together? We have to travel a lot on these tracks... so true... Flight is what is longed for by every caged bird and we exult that we are free! ! But what freedom is this when we are still manacled by the shackles of want and misery, fear and terror, intolerance and bigotry? ? Can we ever aspire for the two warring nations to be one... Let us be hopeful! ! Very powerful write Dinesh! Happy Indedependence day! !

Happy Independence Day Dinesh. Let us have another day of flag hoisting and the distribution of Indian sweets..

india pakistan bangladesh breathe together. their life style is same same feelings but it is a pity we are divided into pieces. problem of kashmir is another issue. how long the naked dance of religion will be going on. i love this poem n include in my list. freedom fighters were only patriot loved the soil sacrificed their life did never think for this day.thnx for sharing

Wise words sir. But are you happy with the freedom that exist today in our country? Do you think we are free? If not by law and lislation but by consumerism and capitalism, we are still ruled. Happy independence day to you too, and hoping we can change a bit more to betterment what our leaders dreamt of our nation becoming.

Happy independence day to you too....these lines also reveal that we all need a peaceful happy life with progress and prosperity, a dream...what if skies deliver a threatening look, we the common people need to keep our eyes open, and stay away from any evil thing...we all need peace...thank you for the poem...and the kind comments...