Friday, December 15, 2017

Happy In Life Comments

Rating: 5.0

Girl, she is flowery
with fragrance that blows the mind
Her beauty is her smile
Words are poetic
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Rini Shibu
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Robert Murray Smith 26 April 2018

Happiness is ephemeral and we seek it here and there. Relating happiness as you do a flowery girl you raise the question is it enough for her lover. A well worked write.+++10

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Sd Tiwari 26 December 2017

I liked the line most 'her beauty is her smile'. you are very right to say beauty lies in smile and that's the treasure to buy love.

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Rini Shibu 27 December 2017

Thanks Mr Tiwari for your comment.

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Edward Kofi Louis 25 December 2017

She is romantic! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rini Shibu 27 December 2017

Thanks Edward, glad to see your comment

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O Poet Me Poety 21 December 2017

very nicely done read me o smiley i am the ole one mepoet yeps poet some virus guy slapped my profile

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Rini Shibu 22 December 2017

Thanks dear poet for reading this poem

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Nudershada Cabanes 21 December 2017

A woman is man's happiness. A man's success will not be complete without a woman by his side.

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Rini Shibu 22 December 2017

Thanks Nuder.. Liked your comment

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Yiyan Han 20 December 2017

”He search“ - He searches?

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Rini Shibu 22 December 2017

Thanks yiyan for reading

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Lamar Cole 15 December 2017

This is a very wonderful poem to read.

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Rini Shibu 16 December 2017

Thanks Lamar..

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