Saturday, May 5, 2018

Happy In America Comments

Rating: 4.9

I grew up in Africa,
I've been to Zanzibar
I've seen the great Rift Valley,
and it's western rim so far,
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Neil Stewart McLeod
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Hebert Logerie 04 June 2018

I like this poem. I like its style, the music in the background. The poet is a very good story teller. He has captured my poetic imagination.

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I like your wonderful comment which lifts my heart and encourages me to do better! Thank you

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Bharati Nayak 04 June 2018

- - - - - - -A sense of gratitude is overflowing in this poem for America, the country which attract people from different parts of the world for its prosperity; the freedom people enjoy here and the warmth with which they are taken in. A wonderful poem, thanks for sharing.

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A delightful response thank you!

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Bharati Nayak 04 June 2018

'm happy in America, America for me, The land that flies the Stars and Stripes, home of the brave and free And should I chance to wander and take a final fling Doubt not that I'll be back again, America I sing. (Part-1)

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Thank you. I am glad you like it Neil

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Muzahidul Reza 04 June 2018

People from different going in America enjoy happiness, good luck, thanks for the poem sharing here, You may like to read my poems

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Thank you very much for saying so. I will take a look at your poems.

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Harley White 04 June 2018

Well done! Again, your poem has a classic tone and touch...

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Thanks Harley, I am glad you liked it. Cheers, Neil

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Kim Barney 04 June 2018

Wonderful poem. Marvelous choice for poem of the day. Great soundtrack to go with it. Congratulations!

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Thank you Kim!

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Thank you for saying so!

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Robert Murray Smith 04 June 2018

Magnificienly crafted and imaged filled.++10

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Thank you for the comment!

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Akhtar Jawad 04 June 2018

Congrats! Travelling all over the world and settling in USA, remaining happy there, you have so nicely penned your feelings that a reader starts thinking what a place USA is. I think that's what you wanted from a reader

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Mahtab Bangalee 04 June 2018

o unstable traveling mind walk, march ahead and run more The earth is round after more you've to come your place- nice

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Thank you Mahtab. Thank you very much!

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Britte Ninad 04 June 2018

The traveling mind; the wanderer beautiful sight no hindrance is in guide to enjoy the happiest natural light over all the world you've traveled By rounding at the point of nostalgic great 10++++

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Thank you Britte, I so appreciate all the comments here, and yours which greets me this morning!

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Thank you Britte, for your kind remarks which greet me this morning!

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Aarzoo Mehek 04 June 2018

A beautiful journey accomplished and finally finding peace at your favorite destination. Such a beautiful poem Neil.

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Aarzoo, thank you. What a delight it is for me to find others who like what I have written!

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Chinedu Dike 02 June 2018

Beautiful rendition of words to utmost justice. Captivating narrative - a smooth flow for joy. A great piece of work. Thanks for sharing Neil and do remain blessed.

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Thank you again for taking the time to discover what I think about and why!

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Robert Portillo 29 May 2018

Great Poem Neil! You have a way with words :)

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Dear Robert, how lovely to hear from you, and to know that my poetry still strikes a chord that pleases!

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Perdita Young 29 May 2018

I love these poems...A rare source to share with friends. So many beautiful places you have travel, that's really something to admire.

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Perdita, I am happy to share my work with you, and thank you for the wonderful comment.

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