Happy I Go Unhappy I Go Comments

liked these lines.....thanks for sharing....

Washed the pieces with tears so hot, Removed the stains in a truly big pot, Colorless, odorless, I made it clean, Bold and fearless when I found the lean, poem written in a wonderful spirit...great work...like it

Life is one of give and take! You give love and you are getting it back! Your concern and loving involvement keeps poem hunter lively! A big THANK YOU!

This is more than extraordinary so beautifully composed with intense emotions and feelings.......Akhtarji........ I am speechless......you are so much talented.....I salute you.......10

Creative and compelling my friend!

Beautiful poem Akhtarji. You are a master of rhythm and rhyme. As it happens you have given much more then what you have taken.Thank you so much.

Beautiful. Nicely penned with your soulful ink. since you don't know where you have to go you are certainly a happiest person of this world.

I do not know where do I go happily or unhappily. This describes a shadows about life in wonderful manner. Beautifully crafted really.

An amazing poem in a lovely style..................10