Wednesday, December 19, 2018

Happy I Am As I Am Comments

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Haply playing flute on a river bank,
He hardly saw the king's man approaching,
Even closer as he came showing rank:
Here, brought have we a message from the king.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Mahtab Bangalee 23 December 2018

exactly - Power cries: give me more till it goes to grave; And trusted least it gains girth, loses height. //// its greatly touched me

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Aniruddha Pathak 26 December 2018

Thank you Mahtab, I've quite a few poems on happiness if you care. Feedback from discerning readers, poets them.delves, encourage you to strive more..

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Bernard F. Asuncion 19 December 2018

A notable narrative, Aniruddha...10+++++

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Aniruddha Pathak 19 December 2018

Thank you, you're a kind heart and liberal.

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