Thursday, February 19, 2009

*happy Farewell Comments

Rating: 3.0

The city of dreams
In conspiracy with nature
Too long indulgence
When it lay bare
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Sadiqullah Khan
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Reshma Ramesh 19 February 2009

beautiful sadiq.......how well u have described the city, the beauty of it and the sadness you feel leaving it...........very well penned....and happy farewell! !

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ata khan 19 February 2009

beautiful I agre with Catrina it is colourful 'The moon and the sun shall shine On my footsteps and the evening Remember me with longing' loved it

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Catrina Heart 19 February 2009

You have painted your poem so colourful and nature loving, great imagery my friend...Happy farewell indeed, for you'll have another journey to take...Wish you'll have a great smooth sail...Von Voyage! ! ! 10+++++++

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Fiona Davidson 19 February 2009

Great write Sadiqullah...thank you....10+

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