Thursday, April 2, 2015

Happy Easter Comments

Rating: 5.0

The evil surmounts the good
To have the last laugh
And we see a tower collapsing!
-The human tower of civilization
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M D Dinesh Nair
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Queeny Gona 17 May 2015

The opening lines of the poem by itself portrays the present scenario of the world which cannot be denied by any one. The evil surmounts the good To have the last laugh Yet there is always a way out to overcome the evil. Next time when CHRIST descends to the earth resurrects all those who stood for him until the end of the day! We can always hope for the good to happen amidst the evil! Wonderful write sir. Thank you for sharing!

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Daniel Brick 16 April 2015

This is a grievously wounded world you are describing, and you are the voice of its pain. But there seem to be no countervailing forces in the world, no people of good will, no Mandela or Gandhi or even a decent politician like Obama. Does this mean we are helpless without divine intervention?

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Abdulrazak Aralimatti 16 April 2015

e would like to trace a good god Trying to reach out to the human woes Compassion, compassion and compassion, Loved reading it

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 April 2015

Very nicely and aptly envisioned and presented the poem 'Happy Easter.' I like it.Many thanks.

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 April 2015

A powerful write on the eve of Easter. Each lines are portrayed very well relating the truth on human lives. Very true said... The evil surmounts the good To have the last laugh And we see a tower collapsing! -The human tower of civilization With tons of tales to tell. Perfect picture of todays world which we are going through, you have captured very well.

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Chandra Thiagarajan 05 April 2015

An awesome poem on the eve of Easter. The concluding para' 'is lovely!

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Valsa George 03 April 2015

With all black clouds looming in the horizon, I must admit that this is a powerful write... a realistic picture of the bleak world that surrounds us! I have been looking for a silver lining amid the dark clouds, but is disappointed. Yes, we know there are wolves out to taste the blood and flesh of lambs and the helpless cries of the attacked fall in our ears! Perhaps the lines I love most in this write are; The clouds floats on the dead skies Want to shed a few tears But the cynical sun fumes them down!

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Kelly Kurt 02 April 2015

An inspiring write, sir. Thank you for sharing. Peace

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Hazel Durham 02 April 2015

Amazing write, with thought provoking inspired lines, but there has to be a light shining in all the darkness, good will overcome evil if we learn to rejoice in our differences and embrace change for a better future! If you have some time I have posted my 100th poem 'Whispers' if you would like to read it. Great to see you back on PH! Thanks for sharing!

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