Sunday, March 4, 2012

Happy Drunk And Dancing Slow Comments

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We danced drunk that night
An awkward dance for our height!
I just held her close real tight
We barely moved a step or two
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Jay Yanni
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Lisa Pringle 19 March 2012

I love this poem Short and sweet, but conveys alot.

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Jay Yanni 11 March 2012

thank you for stopping by and reading Geetima!

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Geetima Baruah Sarma 05 March 2012

Rhyming in the poem is nice

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