I'll tell you what is wrong with me
I hope you will not weep
Happy dreams of marder are enchanting my nights sleep
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I really want to make a film out of this but want to be legit about it. could you email me at herbertfiction@gmail.com?
loved the poem, it made me smile. You should read my poem 'RedRum' it's about murdering someone. anyway great poem really liked it keep up the good work.
hey love the poem. remind me to stay on your good side ;) lol but yah very clever the title is amazing lol
Wow. I love this! It's very well written and clever. It made me smile. Very nice work.
The title is morbidly frightening, almost worth a 10 rating just for the title. Loved the part about better to miurder in yer sleep than dream of a face u hate.
I like how you invite the reader in and take them to the darkest corners of your brain within a few lines. Chilling, amazing. Honest and shocking but real.
An interesting account, but it appeals to my dark side... so I like it! Well described. ~Amber~
I absolutely love this poem, It describes what I dream about quite well. Muder, murder, murder.... it's a beautiful thing.
hahaha....'sweet dreams' is quite obviously a relative concept! I really liked this one Beau!
Hello, I am in the middle of writing a film based on happy dreams of murder. Please email me at herbertfiction@gmail.com If you have any objections.