When you light a candle this year
Capture the spark in your eye
let it twinkle through the life
like a star pasted in the sky
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Wow I love this poem it's more then just beautiful...when you light a candle we all can see
Wow I love this poem it's more then just beautiful...when you light a candle we all can see
When you light a candle this year look in the eyes of the matchstick see it smile through the flare see it live in the candle's wick A truly beautiful write Nikunj....10+
u sread the light...in true measure to the message of the festival of lights very reflective and well done... indeed...how rt When you light a candle this year learn to burn a candle's way Glowing self, melting exterior till the last breath is snatched away. reminds me of a historic & great punjabi mystic poet 'baba bullley shah'....still so reverred and popular.... will send the pertinent part in a message for u.. superb write cheers
When you light a candle this year let the glow travel inwards too through a thick yet warm air To make you gleam and shine through A message of beautiful glow inside out and outside in. Happy Diwali! ! ! !
You have really brought the candle to light with your wonderful imagery. I love 'like a star pasted in the sky' and 'look in the eyes of the matchstick, see it smile through the flare' The last two lines are stunning. 10 love Karin
when you light a candle, please wish for a happy and very prosperous year...include me in your prayer, that sooner or later i can light a candle with you, , , owwwwwwww? ....lolz
Thanks for the lovely message along with the wishes on this festival of light... :) My wishes to u too on this auspicious day.. I have posted few lines 'Shubhkamnayein' on my hindi page under 'Parul Agarwal'
NIKUNJ, WISHING YOU AND YOUR FAMILY, A VERY HAPPY DIWALI! I LOVED THE LAST STANZA WITH ITS BLEND OF PHILOSOPHY! 10! Last Thursday I have put my my 'Diwali Greetings' - on page 2, for all my friends including you! Kindly go through! -Raj
nice sparkles for this diwali...................
Happy Diwali to you and all my poet friends from the land of light. I will light a candle and think of you all tonight. Especially I will watch for the magic in the flare of the match and think of you Nikunj.10
beautiful poem. there is so much serenity in your expressions, very uplifting thoughts.true spirit of Diwali, to light a lamp in your soul. Happy Diwali if time permits read Festival of lights. Mamta
a beautiful poem on the glow of light.is it candle or traditional deepam.nice sharing, happy diwali to you and family voted10 surya
I warm poem so elegantly describing te life in a flame. Happy and safe Diwali.
a lovely poem on the festival of lights...you bring in a lot of meaning into the flame...happy diwali with family and friends
Beautifully done, with warmth and vision. The repetition of the first line serves to tie it all together into one very neat package. Yes, we should all live our lives like a candle - burning brightly until that last flicker. Happy Diwali! Linda :)
Enjoyable poem. Beautiful. Nicely composed. good thought.10+++++
A beautiful poem..I like this very much.Thanks dear Nikunja