Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
Sunday, March 9, 2014

Happy Days Not Again Comments

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Not a blade of grass grows
Not even gentle wind blows
Forget about sun’s rise
And set in east by surprise
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 March 2014

welcome meri cel remirez a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 March 2014

JaiRam Tiwari Lesson&suggestion imgrained 9 hours ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 March 2014

Hasmukh Mehta welcome lisa lombardi a few seconds ago · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 March 2014

Brilliant thoughts! ! ! Piusha Singh46 minutes ago VERY WELL SAID HASMUKH JI, BUT I FEEL ALL THE SEASONS HAVE ITS OWN BEAUTY...i LIKE THIESE LINES VERY MUCH..Happy days are spent in no time Bad days are taking long time The sun turns smile again But we forget the past pain WELL WRITTEN..

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 March 2014

a poem of need Alan Green 'Guppyman'43 minutes ago the poet tells of all of a soul who yearns for more

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 March 2014

Perfect poem to me Shantanu Chindhade46 minutes ago This composition has all the qualities of a very successful poem needs.Full of philoophy too.Liked very much, Shantanu Chindhade Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 March 2014

well done Jeffrey Furtado47 minutes ago this is deep Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 March 2014

Good kevin innocenzi47 minutes ago Good

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Maria C. Pires Costa 09 March 2014

We admire the humility pervading these lines and the consciousness of what is truly realistic in Life. Stanzas three and four convey the reality of a human being and his journey. This is accentuated, I think, in the last stanza, which culminates in these thoughts/ advice: Surrender as if nothing belongs to you/ Will this not be the path true? May sunny days shine within the poet's soul and his life!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 09 March 2014

Not a blade of grass grows Not even gentle wind blows

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