Sunday, February 1, 2015

Happy Birthday To A Friend I'M Missing Comments

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A friend I am missing for so many days,
As if I am missing the bright sun rays,
Is the philosopher poet now tired of thinking?
In a lonely corner cold beverage he is drinking.
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Akhtar Jawad
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Geetha Jayakumar 04 February 2015

A Lovely tribute and Birthday wishes to a missing friend. Refresh your wings; come back like a dove, Fly high in skies with the clouds of love, We need your beautiful nicely knitted shawls, Your friends await and reprove withdrawals. Poem filled with positivity. Even I am an Aquarian, but official date is june, so I can't celebrate my birthday and virgo is my moon sign. Beautiful poem. Loved reading it.

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Salini Nair 03 February 2015

Being human being we are often frustrated, When we are ignored and we are underrated, Many of us commit poetic suicide, There is limit of patience and the abide. very positive write.....like it

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Valsa George 02 February 2015

This is a fantastic write Akhtarji! What a warm welcome to your friend who is missing! Your Birthday Greetings to him is as fragrant and fresh as the bouquet of flowers that accompanies your Greetings! A sure 10

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Bisma Mirza 02 February 2015

wow...... heart touching poem.... Great written! ! ! ! ! :) 10 on 10..

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Khalid Saifullah 01 February 2015

What a beautiful Birthday Greeting........................10

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