Wednesday, July 29, 2015

Happy Birthday Sweet Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rains bring many pretty charms for me,
But the charms are there for others too,
A beautiful gift of clouds, I mean you,
Came with the showers with arms for me,
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Akhtar Jawad
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Hazel Durham 30 July 2016

Outstanding write! I love this poem oozing love and passion for your beautiful wife, your words are like a rainbow full of colour like the love and joy in your heart. You express with such loving and tender lines to your beloved, you give her a gift of all that is in your heart on a page that dances with the great beauty of your love for her.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2015

Wonderful imagery. Beautiful poem. .....10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 31 July 2015

Wonderful imagery. Beautiful poem........10

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Ayman Parray 31 July 2015

Dear Akhtar, you have a beautiful heart and a wonderful art of writing! ! ! . Happy birthday and best wishes to the lady.

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Valsa George 30 July 2015

She will be on cloud nine receiving such a warm bouquet of greetings on her birthday from her beloved! I too wish her a Happy Birthday!

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What a beautiful way to wish a dear beloved! Very well done, Sir. (10)

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Bisma Mirza 30 July 2015

Very Beautiful poem.....its amazing! ! 10 on 10

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Kelly Kurt 30 July 2015

Such a lovely poem my friend.

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Khalida Bano Ali 29 July 2015

I am only forty eight, I don't count the years before I met you, My life started when I met you, Or I am even younger than that, Because I subtract the time passed, That I loose due to your absence, A careful calculation, I passed only sixteen years with you, So what's wrong, If you find me only sixteen, A sweet sixteen!

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