You were born years before On this day
being wished happiness every year
the same way
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awesome poem...............my birthday is November 11th. Thanks in advance.. I'm only kidding.. wonderful poem,
such a wonderful piece for your friend... expressive...with all sincerity Wonderful lines are playing in this piece.. a beautiful, poetic tribute 10+++ Lovelots, Maia
Hap Hap Happy Birthday dear Debby (hey I wished you earlier in your inbox-check it out there lol! ! !) love anjali
Such a charming lovely poem.............Happy Birthday to your friend.......Deborah!
'The age they say; Lies in deed May that forever be your creed. Celebrate here on each day Each second, each moment So that each day is well spent..' A beautiful tribute for a superb poet, Nikunj.. Yelena M.
a beautiful and a loving birthday tribute from your heart of gold. I wish i can have a tribute like this too on my birthday..(LOL) Hugs, meggie
this poem is highly appreciated.. to D C...wish you a happy birthday..lavs ya.. to nikz...goodluck.. i maybe jealous from the words u paint in these lines i maybe crying for the sophisticated lines you put in here i maybe telling the truth or lies i maybe...but i am not..lolz the poem is nicely expressed..goodluck..
Out of this world Nikunj! the message is so DIVINE :)
Nikunj, this is a beautiful song wishing a happy bithday to Deborah Cromer. We too join you in wishing many happy returns of the day. CP
very artfully done and charmimg... loved it hi many happy returns deb.... check out my latest poem....through the winodw pane.... nikunj... abeautiful befitting bd wish....
vow! a great and touching poem. a GREAT TRIBUTE TO A POET.VOTED10 SURYA
Nothing better than to dedicate a loving birthday wish in a poem..especially when it's to one of the most warm hearted poetess's here at PH..Miss Deborah Cromer....Thank you for sharing this with us Nikunj...a fine poem indeed. I hope you have a wonderful day Deb's...and many more to come. Your friend always Jon London x
Okay, for this I have to post a perfect 10! The posting meter only goes to 10, or else I would have to vote higher. This is wonderful! Even better, it is for ME! Truly the most unique birthday gift this time. As a poet yourself, you know my appreciation of this special gesture! . In the grand tradition of immortalizing words in memory, you have succeeded a great step! Now the party may begin! DC Did I tell you I love this poem? ? ? ? ? ?
This is the most special birthday poem I have ever read, and you acknowledge how your friend is happily cruising along, but you wish her even more. I love the repetition of 'some more'. The last stanza 'takes the cake' as a finale to a wonderful poem. 10 love Karin