Happy Birthday, Barbara! Comments

This is wonderful and exhibits the skill to rhyme writing. I think that you have used the limirick staza model before and you make it work so well. I still love hear Lear. He was one of my childhood loves. I havn't a clue what mind-altering substance he took, but it certainly produced some great work. You do not use such substances and therefore your language is down-to-earth. A wonderful tribute sir!

Cute witty tribute H... perfect rhyme as ever. t x

I liked your rhyme scheme. It was very sing-songy. audrey