Thursday, February 21, 2008

Happy Birthday Comments

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but i saw you today
without the delightful pleasure
of hasty introductions
of trivial formalities
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Katelyn Hinman
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Jeremy Rodriguez 08 May 2008

It took us forever to figure out what this poem was about in Lit Mag! This was one of my favorites though. I gave it a pretty high score when I graded it. Keep up the great work :)

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Frank Bana 03 March 2008

'innocent orbital abyss'... Superb, Superb! ! ! I hope you will write for the next 90 years... this is brilliant. I'm very serious! Frank

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