Sunday, June 1, 2008

Happy Birth Day Comments

Rating: 2.3

To you happy birth day,
And have a nice day.
If there will be Sunday or Monday,
I will say only today.
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Hiralal Patil
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Wahab Abdul 09 January 2012

a very good poem indeed i like the poem..and i enjoyed it toooo.....keep it up...please read my poem, , new ones

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Ashraful Musaddeq 24 May 2009

Thank you for sharing this happy poem.

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Vijay Gupta 03 June 2008

theme of the poem is very good.i like it.

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David Gronski 01 June 2008

not bad. could use some improvment though. but as for a simple birthday poem, its good.

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Hiralal Patil

Hiralal Patil

Jalgaon, INDIA
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