Happy And Sad Journey Of The River Comments

Your poem meanders and flows beautifully, like the river in true serenity! 10! And between the banks of the Tigris and the Euphrates the oldest human civilization flourished in Mesopotapia, followed by the banks of the Nile and the Indus! -Raj

It's hardly a moment when the world and things in it don't change, we all go through the process of metamorphosis and the rivers aren't any exception. Let the winds of change settle down, the harmonic days will return. A wonderful write, underlining the disturbed balancesand in nature and its consequences!

it's makes a wonderful read...only wished it's shorter!