Saturday, November 1, 2008

¿happy? Comments

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¿Happy?

I am glad.
Since the sun is shining on your face,
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valentino montanna
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Dr.subhendu Kar 02 September 2009

Life doesn’t have to be a slaughter, take it as a warm embrace.................ingenious write by happiness, yet it flows by lucidity but crunches at the end, wonderfully curved over over suspense, well done penned, m10+++, thanks for sharing

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I love the twist, I love the format, I love the beat, Great poem for a Great poet. Take a peek at my poems if you are inclined.

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