Saturday, May 3, 2014

Happiness To Me Comments

Rating: 5.0

Happiness to me, is sleep without dreams,
It's to lie lost to all and to the world
It's my internal alarm ringing on time
It's awakening refreshed and strong
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Juan Olivarez
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Kumarmani Mahakul 17 September 2019

Happiness motivates mind in all contexts of life. Being in hope and walking in rain we perceive great happiness. An excellent poem is shared...10

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Connie Yost 07 March 2017

All those lovely things should mean happiness to everybody. That last verse is the frosting on a beautiful cake, Juan

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Adeline Foster 26 August 2016

A Lovely poem with a beautiful lilt! Well done. Read mine - O Dearest Love - Adeline

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Terry Craddock 25 November 2015

Exquisite, as enchantingly beautiful as the birth of a radiant new day, with the juxtaposition of clear concise fresh yet startlingly simple images, which warm the heart with a wonderful insight into the world of Juan Olivarez.10+++

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Valerie Dohren 05 May 2014

Beautiful Juan, you are both so lucky to have each other and to know such happiness, which sadly for me is lost forever. A lovely write.

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 04 May 2014

Fantastic writing Juan, vivdand tenderly sweet, so natural and true. Always you signature style, smooth and perfect word choice.

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Colleen Courtney 03 May 2014

A very nicely written poem with a beautiful last verse! Well done again Juan!

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