Sunday, October 25, 2009

Happiness=open Mindedness Comments

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There's more to life than this you see,
I'm tired of this monotony
an overdose of similarity
has taken this bordem to a 't'
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Zoe Wyant
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Barry Reiter 18 April 2010

Very nice, Zoe. I think that your poem could depict a kind of endless loop. 'Others' may also have something to do with these desires for change, and the urge for difference may ironically be part of this same externally-mediated drive toward conformity...leading to a desire for change. The fashion industry seems to love this situation. Thanks for the thought-provoking poem.

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Zoe Wyant

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Chattanooga, Tennessee
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