Monday, March 20, 2006

Happiness On A Winter’s Night Comments

Rating: 5.0

Snow began to fall at ten in the evening
fine cold adamantine snow.
On Atlantic I drove slowly, the streets being slippery,
looking for a lady
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Charles Chaim Wax
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... ... 25 March 2006

the most interesting line in the poem for me? - 'so tender, almost true.'

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Hugh Cobb 20 March 2006

There is much to be said for human connection no matter how temporary it always provides that warmth on a cold lonely night the passing moment which just for an instant is perfect and true. A sweet, tender, and loving poem.

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Uriah Hamilton 20 March 2006

Beauty comes in the fragile night when tenderness is accidentally found.

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Julia Klimenova 20 March 2006

A wonderful balance of love (and life) and death. The heat of passion and the cold of snowflakes. Excellent poem. Julia

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Ron Dragano 20 March 2006

Hitting some high notes on the wailing saxaphone of after midnight blues- notes drifting fading into snowflakes nice job of juggling your great romantic heart with the gritty riding the subway of hard love railway

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