Tuesday, June 3, 2014

Happiness Knocked At Your Door Before Comments

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Happiness knocked at your door before it could knock at mine.
You got your part of color from the rainbow, I am still colorblind.
And you hold on to your cheerful day, a bright light has shown.
mine its still dark, the day, the feelings, the people still mourn.
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Rajnish Manga 09 June 2016

Pray for me if you could take time out from your happiness. Don't forget my sorrow.../ Wonderful poem unfolding the predicament of human nature. Thanks.

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Akhtar Jawad 24 June 2014

An impressive write, makes the reader sentimental.

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 June 2014

Very beautiful poem from your pen Kirti. We dont know when life will turn us....... Loved reading it. Keep writing.

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Saurav Singh 03 June 2014

A mirror to the real world. very beautifully expressed. But when people are really attached to their loved ones, it is only the happiness of their loved ones which matters. No one can ever be truly happy when people close to then are not. Its all about the heart. excellent poem with a profound message. : -)

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Saurav Singh 03 June 2014

A mirror to the real world. very beautifully expressed. But when people are really attached to their loved ones, it is only the happiness of their loved ones which matters. No one can ever be truly happy when people close to then are not. Its all about the heart. excellent poem with a profound message. : -)

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