Sunday, September 20, 2020

Happiness Is Seed, No Sprout Comments

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The early morning winter's soothing mist,
The serene silver hue of setting moon,
Skies amber made by rising sun in east,
Together gave my mind a virtual boon,
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Aniruddha Pathak
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A sonnet that deals with inner happiness which according to the poet is a natural phenomina beyond cause-effect-paradigm. Thought provoking poem

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Rajnish Manga 21 September 2020

Myriad moods of the nature like soothing mist, setting moon or rising sun can trigger the right mood in a sensitive soul. The second part of the Sonnet makes it clear that mote than the external factors, it is the internal factors that motivate a man to derive happiness as a matter of choice. Thanks for the amazing poem and also for the Notes.

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Varsha M 20 September 2020

A very beautiful sonnet on happiness. Admirations sir.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 September 2020

A very perceptive poem beautifully crafted. The superb imagery and nice rhyme made this poem so wonderfully presented and conveyed.

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Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
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