Monday, August 10, 2015

Happiness Is... Comments

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... if you're comfortably ageing
(on Social Security or a pension,
or, even better, both)
is not all that complex, to be
...
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Frank Avon
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Daniel Brick 09 September 2015

Those last three lines cap this poem just perfectly. And they give you the moment to express a deeper faith in God and spouse which the breezy and mercurial tone of most of the poem would not fit. Being 68 myself (What's that? Oh, OK - 68 1/2 - Satisfied!) and living on my pension, I can appreciate every dimension of this poem. I connect to it biographically. whereas OUTSIDE MY WINDOW was an aesthetic connection.

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