When the breeze of happiness
Sweeps into the empitiness
Taking away the dark clouds
Leaving behind wetness in my soul
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Taking away the dark clouds! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
New life embrace the solitude And footprints of rainbow changes my mood, beautiful line it is.100++++++++++
footprints of rainbow change my mood EXCELLENT SOLITUDE R SHIBU
Hi Rini, Lovely commentary on the moods of gaiety. Again brevity makes the poem more enjoyable.
A beautiful poem that fills life. Thanks for commenting on my poem.
When we feel happiness in solitude, there is contentment in life. A wonderful poem that captures happiness. Great imagery. Thank you, Rini for your wonderful comments on my poems. I feel honored.
When the breeze of happiness Sweeps into the empitiness Taking away the dark clouds Leaving behind wetness in my soul New life embrace the solitudes And footprints of rainbow changes my mood... beautiful poem..
Such a beautiful poem. Short and sweet and a nice flow. Loved it.
I really love the mood of this write. thank you for sharing, Rini :) +++++10