Happiness In Solitude Poem by Rini Shibu

Happiness In Solitude

Rating: 4.6


When the breeze of happiness
Sweeps into the empitiness
Taking away the dark clouds
Leaving behind wetness in my soul
New life embrace the solitudes
And footprints of rainbow changes my mood

Sunday, June 9, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: happiness,mood
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anil Kumar Panda 09 June 2019

Such a beautiful poem. Short and sweet and a nice flow. Loved it.

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Prabir Gayen 09 June 2019

When the breeze of happiness Sweeps into the empitiness Taking away the dark clouds Leaving behind wetness in my soul New life embrace the solitudes And footprints of rainbow changes my mood... beautiful poem..

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 09 June 2019

When we feel happiness in solitude, there is contentment in life. A wonderful poem that captures happiness. Great imagery. Thank you, Rini for your wonderful comments on my poems. I feel honored.

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Jane Campion 09 June 2019

A beautiful poem that fills life. Thanks for commenting on my poem.

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Unnikrishnan E S 09 June 2019

Hi Rini, Lovely commentary on the moods of gaiety. Again brevity makes the poem more enjoyable.

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Cheryl Tutaan 11 July 2019

I really love the mood of this write. thank you for sharing, Rini :) +++++10

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Edward Kofi Louis 10 July 2019

Taking away the dark clouds! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 22 June 2019

New life embrace the solitude And footprints of rainbow changes my mood, beautiful line it is.100++++++++++

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 10 June 2019

footprints of rainbow change my mood EXCELLENT SOLITUDE R SHIBU

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Lamar Cole 09 June 2019

This is a very wonderful poem about happiness in solitude.

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