Thursday, January 2, 2020

Happiness: I Know Thou, Not Still Comments

Rating: 5.0

Man's is useless passion, a thinker said,
Life is futile, a foison of stale dreams,
And not worth all the fuss heretofore made,
Which, more is made, more futile to me seems.
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Aniruddha Pathak
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Edward Kofi Louis 04 January 2020

Miserable of love and life! ! Mankind on earth, Living in pain, Chain of life! ! No gain at all! ! ! ! ! ! No rain at sight, Still pampering pain! Trying to overcome; Able to bring gladness to the soul. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. Nice piece of work.

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Aniruddha Pathak 05 January 2020

'Nice piece of work', rare words, and so valued all the more, thanks indeed.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 04 January 2020

A wonderful ode to hapiness sir! You have very meticulously depicted facets of happiness in different brilliant stanzas! May I quote just two fabulous lines from your work, " In good tidings it takes to wings sublime/And yet thou dwelleth far beyond the hill! A beautiful poem..........Top score!

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Aniruddha Pathak 04 January 2020

It is such comments that make you good-enough poems liked by reader/poets that know what a good poem is. Thank you so much.

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