Wednesday, April 9, 2014

Happiness(Haiku) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Soap bubbles flying
Tiny claps, gentle jump
Melting mother's heart.
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Toshie Nohara
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Dev Anand 09 April 2016

flying bubbles, jumping heart of the mother....... very nice. full of surprises. like it. dev

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Rahman Henry 26 September 2015

Lovely Haiku. Heart melting, in deed. Thank you, Toshie Nohara.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 August 2015

i love haikus. like to read them. this is very nice thank you

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Allotey Abossey 08 August 2015

Some memories are hard to be erased... Good write. God bless you

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Elena Sandu 03 March 2015

Beautiful haiku! Yes the most happy time, relaxing joyful bath!

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* Sunprincess * 25 June 2014

...................oh this is the cutest poem ever....enjoyed...

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Stephen W 10 April 2014

Very nice indeed, unusual for sen-ryu

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I love haiku and I write them, too...very joyful a ten

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