Wednesday, February 11, 2009

Happiness Flames Comments

Rating: 2.8

Happiness spreads like a forest fire.
Dead twigs and leaves dusted with hatred
Burn up seconds after the little flame
Begins to dance.
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Gordon Wilkinson 22 February 2009

i like the metaphor of fire - well written - 10

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Rita Shay

Rita Shay

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