Saturday, June 26, 2021

Happiness Comments

Rating: 5.0

From last April
To a June spent in misery
It once came for me
Eagerly
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Anisa Tara
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Unnikrishnan E S 12 July 2021

A September has come/ But I want it to go /An April I once lost/ Is all my heart knows/ … lovely writing. Loved the poem. Even though it is melancholy the mood of the poem, the choice of words and phrases make it dear to the reader. Full score

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 27 June 2021

A wonderful lovely poem. Kudos! Plz do read and comment my newest poem too ritled, ' the value of life and oxygen '

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