Thursday, October 1, 2020

Happiness Comments

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Don't be the one to leave,
Happiness on hold.
Have it to know it had,
And live it.
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Lawrence S. Pertillar
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L Milton Hankins 01 October 2020

i'm not sure I know what's behind the theme of this poem, but I like its straightforwardness. I like the rhythm with which it moves. Thanks you.

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Lawrence S. Pertillar

Lawrence S. Pertillar

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