Thursday, May 28, 2015

Happiness Comments

Rating: 5.0

The young girl next door
Isn't happy.
As her dear Dad didn't get a new toy,
Although she had many to play with.
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bakuli bhakali
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Young Church Poetry 11 November 2015

Well written with a great message, jealousy is a bad thing and most of the times jealous people do not enjoy life at all. They are always unhappy about something. Great poem Bakuli...

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Bakuli Bhakali 12 November 2015

my pleasure! ! thanks for a wonderful comment!

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Allotey Abossey 21 June 2015

I can see some trend in your writings... You write well and your messages are clear... Stay at peace in your heart

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Bakuli Bhakali 12 November 2015

thank you so much! your comments means a lot! ! thank you again!

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