Friday, May 8, 2015

Happiness Comments

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Dragging thousand tufts, determined, I sailed
a ghastly figure, demon or angel appeared
averting the clash, I nearly drowned
a minute late to destiny, I frowned
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Abby Sze 08 May 2015

I enjoy reading it. I like how it is conversional and the last verse as conclusion. Happiness is inside of you!

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Shreej K.c 17 May 2015

Thank you Abby!

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