Thursday, July 30, 2015

Happiness Comments

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Lonely is a tree,
Caught by cluster of soil,
Established above layers of rock,
There it grows
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Abby Sze
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Roseann Shawiak 30 July 2015

Excellent poem, I love it! I like how you focus on each detail separately and expand on it, then in the end culminating with the understanding that happiness can be found in great sorrow and darkness if we choose to find it and be happy. Very profound words! Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

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