Monday, July 29, 2013

Happiness Comments

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people spend their wholes lives,
looking for happiness,
but they never find it,
and are never truly happy.
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Jeryn Bean
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Liliana ~el 08 September 2013

I find a beauty and peacefulness in the things I don't have, for this leaves hope and interest to pursue. Even looking for happiness in what one already has is disastrous or mind-boggling. Really, people just need to be content knowing that they simply cannot explain or acquire many aspects of life. We are not living the lives of others because we are meant to live the lives of ourselves.

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Jennifer Toner 31 August 2013

That was really good, and I agree

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Jeryn Bean 03 August 2013

@Ruth, what do you mean by that?

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Ruth Jefferson 01 August 2013

Hey. Thanks for putting your writing out there. I can see the idea that you were going for here, but perhaps it would be better if you showed it more instead of just telling. I feel like this is more prose than poetry.

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Khairul Ahsan 29 July 2013

Good advice. Smaller the want, bigger the happiness.

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