Tuesday, January 31, 2012

Happiness... Comments

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In this perfect world I feel a presence surrounding me,
I am embraced in the arms of a love so devine,
Her heart beats against mine, fingers caressing my soul,
In gasping breaths I inhale whispers of flawless passion,
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Pheko Motaung 04 February 2012

My heart has been healed and my tears dried I am inspired and from now on I am going to be less cynical about the world thanks to your magnificent poem.Well done.

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Silentpoet Grl 01 February 2012

'For this is nothing more than a beautiful dream, If only love could find this desolate soul, ' such an awesome poem!

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Hans Vr 01 February 2012

Very nice poem. Keep dreaming and bleive it to come true; sooner or later it will. Peace to you

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