Happiness Comments

Loved the poem...had great rhyme scheme. Also had great depth to it. =)

I love the fact that you've managed to make the rhyme scheme in this poem obvious, but subtle at the same time. I didn't really like the last line, but I give this poem a 7.5

happiness comes from the heart and yes God gives you the strength and the heart for happiness and you should be very thankful for He will be there no matter what.

wow, a happy-ish poem. i like the topic. its so true that God can turn everything around....if u let Him...

wow I really liked this poem... your a good poet... keep up the good work=)