Saturday, August 20, 2016

Happiness- 2 Comments

Rating: 5.0

Once Happiness was moving in a garden
Liveliness and enchanting colour drew my attraction
Really beautiful as flower
Anointed with golden sun light..
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SRIRANJI ARATISANKAR
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Rajnish Manga 20 August 2016

You have really brought to us the personified charm of happiness we all tend to adore so much but the poem has turned the atmosphere melancholic and very sad towards the end with the demise of this happiness. Great imagery and a great poem. We human beings have to go through such shocking metaphoric situations.

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