Happiness Comments

This is a very well written poem, Caroline, and it speaks a universal truth that we must live with the truth of ourselves, no matter what it is. Your metaphor of using the sparrow in a cage was very effective in this fine poem, as even if we try to hide the truth, or deny it's existence, we still are what we are, even if we refuse to believe it. It is a very thought provoking and effective write. Carl.