Tuesday, November 4, 2008

Happiness Comments

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Happiness is an experession
that is shown by love and compretion
a wonderfull feeling that never ends
or a feeling of freedom that sees use atlast
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Boris Barron
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Raj Nandy 06 November 2008

Dear Boris, You write well, keep writing! -Raj Nandy

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Aaron Combs 05 November 2008

hey borris uhh yea did you misspell experession or is that a new I don't know.. but yea it's all very true, pretty good write Comment please if you will thanks! !

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C. P. Sharma 04 November 2008

Happiness is an expretion that is shown by love and compretion a wonderfull feeling that never ends or a feeling of freedom that sees use atlast Boris, it is very well written. I liked your attempt, keep it up.

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your right happiness is a wonderful thing i love this poem can you please read 'To have and to hold' when you have the time. thank you so much

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Boris Barron

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