Happiness Comments

Still grieving about your beloved Mom. Gorgeous poem so very touching. Brilliantly worded.Thank you for sharing

I identify myself with this poem... You never know you're happy until its gone....

Well composed, liked the fleeting references.

Very nice lines to read, Very nice to compose. Thank you

Wonderful sir! What a composition!

Very beautifully written, flowery with images. Thanks.

A true picture portrayed with a great vision of life, which has temporary felicities and long-lasting sorrows...

Happiness is elusive as the wind Comes and goes like migrating birds And rich echoes of church bells Sooooo True I think this is the way that God teaches us to appreciate Every moment of happines Coz it doesnt last, and if it does last we would lose it's taste Simply AMAZING thx for sharing

why is it that happiness never lasts? i wish it did

It's sad how happiness comes and goes. great write.

Happiness is a cruel mistress in how she comes quickly and goes without warning... We should just enjoy it and not disrupt it while it lasts.... wonderful write.

With what would we measure happiness if not for pain? Lovely poem.

Nicely penned sir....truly happiness cant be with us forever.... Fahim

awesome piece...very well written...thanks for sharing...truly deserves a 10+....

nice poem --good read. thanks for sharing with us

This is a poem of loss and sorrow simply told and direct. Love which was once taken for granted and lost then becomes valued - a human defect. Enjoyable. Understandable I liked it.

Held fast within my grasp Never lost to the furies of purple storms! awesome Jeffery r

I agree with you that at times even if we desire to be happy we miss the chance to be as it eloped with the unseen wind. But happiness will always come when we have faith in our heart when we wait for its light and grace take care and more power, melvin

'Happiness is elusive as the wind' This is very true. You have written it well Thanks. Pls read my poem on 'Happiness' Ravi

Indeed we cant slave happiness..anyways if we be happy all the time..it will make no sense..we will forget what is happiness...we need some sorrows as well.... to enjoy and understand happiness.... Fahim